Steve pointed out that the oppening line was a litlle weak, so I changed it, hopefully improved it.
And Karen … what can I say about Karen. She took the effort of editting the text for misspelling and awkward English. You will find the result here, perhaps you have to scroll a litlle.
I'm verry greathfull to them all and proud of the result.
All I need te do now, is find an editor in Sevilla [or Spain] who want's to publish this.
Chris: http://cfajohnson.com/
Steve: http://shootingpeople.org/cards/steve_turnbull
Karen: http://www.kstoddardhayes.com/
Abha: http://www.abhaiyengar.com/
